The Journey
From Villiers Park.
As I came ashore, dripping salt water on the virgin sands, I could have sworn I heard a dove cooing somewhere in the leafy paradise.
I felt ashamed, leaving my footprints in the flat white sand. This island was meant to be forever untouched. I knew it instinctively.
It was calm, peaceful, warm. The sun was blazing hot on my back. I was eager to leave the beach. It felt too open, too treacherous.
It's only a beach, I said. No need to be afraid.
It's not the beach I'm afraid of.
I wasn't going to hang around, in any case. It would be much safer in the forest.
It enveloped me. I could stay a mystery to the island in here.
Why was I thinking of the island as a person? Surely it was ridiculous. But somehow it wasn't ridiculous.
"It's not all in my head," I said aloud.
Silence. Then cooing again.
And suddenly there it was. The dove. My guardian angel. A lone dove living on an island.
"Show me the way."
The way to where?
I don't know.
It did not fly away. Stubborn.
We stared and stared.
Then it lifted its angelic wings and alighted on my shoulder.
I named him Pedero. He became my spirit in what was to follow.
Thus began my journey.


2 Comments:
this is a good beginning, you should try to finish it off :3
pedero eh? hehe nice! liking the one sentences that say it all if you catch me drift. great beginning ;)
tom x
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